Tuesday, September 30, 2008
Poetry Critique
Biscuits Of Love
by Mindy Carpenter
Memories of my youth.
Flood over my soul.
When I think of Grandma.
They make me feel whole.
Gathering at her house.
With all the family there.
We made lots of memories.
For all of us to share.
Lessons that she taught me.
Guide me thru the day.
If I listened closely.
I cannot go astray.
Love and commitment.
She drilled into me.
Making the person that I am.
Just who I want to be.
Grandma has many names.
Each one has their chosen.
But the names I want her calledStarts with love,
For she is warm and not frozen.
http://famouspoetsandpoems.com/
I picked this poem because i read the the title and the first couple of lines and found it to be very interesting. it also talks about the love for her grandma, and i have alot of love for my grandma. I think that the title is good because it doesnt tell about the whole poem it just shows that there is love in the story. i also think that it talks about the biscuits beucase she might remember her grandmas house that way. Maybe her grandma made bicuits alot. Flood over my soul is a metaphor. for she is warm and not frozen is something that you have to figure out and see what she is saying. when she says this i think that she is talking about how her grandma is ery loveing and that all she is. The feeling that the poem give me is the feeling of love. The tone of this piece is memoy. i think this becuase the whole poem is about how she loves her grandma and loves to think about the great memorys that she had with her.
by Mindy Carpenter
Memories of my youth.
Flood over my soul.
When I think of Grandma.
They make me feel whole.
Gathering at her house.
With all the family there.
We made lots of memories.
For all of us to share.
Lessons that she taught me.
Guide me thru the day.
If I listened closely.
I cannot go astray.
Love and commitment.
She drilled into me.
Making the person that I am.
Just who I want to be.
Grandma has many names.
Each one has their chosen.
But the names I want her calledStarts with love,
For she is warm and not frozen.
http://famouspoetsandpoems.com/
I picked this poem because i read the the title and the first couple of lines and found it to be very interesting. it also talks about the love for her grandma, and i have alot of love for my grandma. I think that the title is good because it doesnt tell about the whole poem it just shows that there is love in the story. i also think that it talks about the biscuits beucase she might remember her grandmas house that way. Maybe her grandma made bicuits alot. Flood over my soul is a metaphor. for she is warm and not frozen is something that you have to figure out and see what she is saying. when she says this i think that she is talking about how her grandma is ery loveing and that all she is. The feeling that the poem give me is the feeling of love. The tone of this piece is memoy. i think this becuase the whole poem is about how she loves her grandma and loves to think about the great memorys that she had with her.
Tuesday, September 23, 2008
Choice
Today i am going to tell you about my trip to Arizona. i have been to Arizona twice in my life but i am going to tell you about my most recent time visiting there. During this past summer i went to Arizona for a family reunion. I had the time of my life when i was there. We traveled all around AZ we went from the south to the way top. We visited lake Powell witch is a very cool lake because all around the lake there is big cliffs and rocks. Its a lot different then Minnesota because around all the lakes in Minnesota there are big trees. At the end of the trip we ended up at my uncles house. He lives on a ranch and it is very cool. The best part about being in Arizona was being with all my cousins that i don't get to see very often.
Thursday, September 18, 2008
tonight
Tonight should be a good night even though it is only a thursday. Around 8 oclock my best friend sam swenson is coming home from college. He is leaveing today around 5 from duluth. He is takeing the bus home from there and he has asked me to pick him up from the bus station. i havent been able to hangout with him sense he has left so i am really looking forward to when he gets back.
Perosnal Narrative
Conclusion
Ever sense i have met my coach's they have been big parts of my life. they have taught me what to do in parts of my life. their inspiration has made me the best person i could ever be.
I think i have to add parts from the story that show the inspiration they have given me
what do you think i should add to my conclusion that will make it more engaging.
Ever sense i have met my coach's they have been big parts of my life. they have taught me what to do in parts of my life. their inspiration has made me the best person i could ever be.
I think i have to add parts from the story that show the inspiration they have given me
what do you think i should add to my conclusion that will make it more engaging.
Wednesday, September 10, 2008
Discover
Animals, bike jumps, bredasen, college, dizz, eazy e, fish tank, fishing, field trips, grizzly bears, hockey, halo, king, Minnesota, piranhas, playground, red rover, school, smokeless tobacco, snowboarding, stealing chromes, trumpet, tennis, tag, war, winter, and zoo.
Well i guess im going to start out the blogging carrer by writing about today. Today have been a rough day for me, but it has been going pretty well. I woke up this morning not feeling very good, my left ear hurts and my throat was feeling a little sour. I ate breakfast and went to school. Once i got to school i remembered that there was a deca vocab quiz 2nd hour. I tried to study for it in my first hour class, which was spanish. today was the first time all year we learned something in spanish, but i was to tired to remember what we were learning. the quiz went pretty good 2nd hour. at lunch i got nachos and sat with my friends. Now, i am in creative writing makeing a blog and starting off the blogging carrer.
Well i guess im going to start out the blogging carrer by writing about today. Today have been a rough day for me, but it has been going pretty well. I woke up this morning not feeling very good, my left ear hurts and my throat was feeling a little sour. I ate breakfast and went to school. Once i got to school i remembered that there was a deca vocab quiz 2nd hour. I tried to study for it in my first hour class, which was spanish. today was the first time all year we learned something in spanish, but i was to tired to remember what we were learning. the quiz went pretty good 2nd hour. at lunch i got nachos and sat with my friends. Now, i am in creative writing makeing a blog and starting off the blogging carrer.
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