Thursday, November 13, 2008

into the wild

  • my intial imopression of this book is that he is a very brave guy. he also knew what he wanted to do and didnt look back on it and ever think that it was a bad idea in any way.
  • brave, this is because chris never thought about going back and had a courage to go into the wild in th first place.
  • that people can go a far way if they depend on themselves. that people can do alot alone.
  • into the wild can relate to the hatchet because the book is about a guy that is stranded in the woods even though in the hatchet he didnt try to be.

Wednesday, November 12, 2008

review dislike

i am going to write my review about grizzly park directed by tom skull.

well in this movie there are many of characters. all these characters don't know each other at the beginning of the movie. but just a short while in to the movie they come together at grizzly park for a special tour. they all go out into the park together and have a good time. but there is only one thing, this is that it is getting dark fast and they don't know how to get back to the camp site. from my opinion it is a very terrible movie because a these people in the movie are realty lame people. the whole time they are trying to figure out the stupidest thing which is like trying to stay warm. but when you are watching it you know what is going to happen. and you are just like you shouldn't being doing this to the characters. and they still do it which is very not nice as a viewer. i personally don't think that there is a theme to this movie. but i guess if you had to say that there is a theme it would be to not get stuck in a life threatening position. i would like to say this Right now because i think that it is a good time to say it, i would like to say that you should never watch this movie. the only reason i watched it is because it had grizzly in the front thing. glen morshower is the ranger that brings all these people into the movie. he is a pretty bad actor. i would say that he is a main character because you know him for the longest time and people aren't around very long. this director tom skull like to try to scare people but it really doesn't work in this film i believe that he could do a better job on scaring people.

review like

the movie that i am reviewing is wedding crashers a comedy directed by David Dobkin.

Wedding Crashers is about two guys that have been best friends for a very long time. they work together in an office. Once a year in every year these 2 guys have a wedding season. During the season they crash weddings to sleep with girls. They have a great season and sleep with lots of women. I believe that the plot of this movie is great. That all these guys want during the whole movie is women, and they get plenty of it. These 2 guys get to the end of the season and think and start to believe that it is getting alittle childish doing all the crashes. they dont realize that they are both starting to fall for girls. they dont want to tell the other one and start doin there own thing and sort of become not friends any more. the theme of this story is that at the end of haveing so much fun they still have to get thier lives back in order. they dont figure out that doing this for the rest of their lives would be a bad mistake and would rather make a family and do it the old fasion way. owen wilson and vince vaughn are the 2 crashers in this movie. owen wilson plays the cast of john beckwith. vince vaughn plays the cast of jeremy grey. these 2 characters make this movie extremely funny. this is a great comedy that you should get to watch. "shut up peter pan" is a great line that john uses in the movie to bring out the funnyness in the air. the style that this writer uses is that it is a very funny movie that every one should eventually see. this is beucase the movie should not get any funnier because there is know way it could get any funnier.

Wednesday, November 5, 2008

in the future

in the the future i think that this nation and world will be a better place. our nation is 4 years will be more complete and everyone will be loving life more that before. i do believe that it will be a much different place . I'm not really sure what will be addressed more closely in 2012 but i do believe the problem with gas will diffidently be addressed. i think that our world and nation will be changed for the better once I'm 21-22 years of age.

i think our world will be very much of the same when i am in my 40's.. but i think the way we live life will be changed . i also believe that it could be better but i also believe that it could also be a worse place but i can tell quite yet.

dear mister president


what should we do about abortion?
what should we do about taxes?
what should we do about the economy?
what should we do about the war?
what should we do about the Bush policies?
what change do you think the nation is looking for?
how are you going to change the world?
what are you going to do about gas?

Thursday, October 30, 2008

very nice october 30

IM football champs, last week we had to play off games. the first game was the one that got us into the championship. we spanked the team that we played. i didn't think that they even had a chance. the next day was the championship the game was talked about the whole day at school. it was supposed to be a close game. but we pulled a head Early and got a quick touchdown. we ended up winning 21-0 i didn't think they really had a chance either but, i had to give them credit because they stuck with us in the first game that we meet up with them.just another undefeated season for the harlem hustlers.

Playing with Poetry october 13

you can see every drop
screaming through the sky
like rolling down my face
shinning through the sun
once i get by you
the ground is wet and slippery
but you can also make it safe
the rainbow that shins through
reminds me of the good times with you
the are gone
and the sun is back
just like me and you

Monday, October 13, 2008

10/13 free write




today is monday it is a great day but there is jsut one thing about this day that is very special. around 9 oclock on modays i get to go to old mans. old mans is such a very nice time. but monday really isnt my favorite day it is actually my least favorite day. the only good part of the day is at night which is old mans hockey. it is fun to play against old men because they are a bunch of hacks and we get to chirp them all nigiht long. actually my favorite day is probably friday because that is the day we get off school. i always like to take friday lightly because after school on monday is the best part of the week.

Tuesday, October 7, 2008

octomber 7th blog

Well today is going very good for me. one good thing that happen was that the vikings beat the saints last night. another great thing is that school started at noon today. being at school really isnt that bad i have been haveing a great day so far. we havent done much . in gym we played lightening the hole time so that was good.

love metaphor

Love is like the moon
While it attracks the suns glare all through the night
From earth it glows
letting everything no what night can bring you
the moon can bring loved ones together
just like valentines day
Meeting at Night by robert browning
http://www.poetry.com/lovepoems/lovepoems.asp

1The gray sea and the long black land;
And the yellow half moon large and low;
And the startled little waves that leap
In fiery ringlets from their sleep,
As I gain the cove with pushing prow,
And quench its speed i' the slushy sand.
2Then a mile of warm sea-scented beach;
Three fields to cross till a farm appears;
A tap at the pane, the quick sharp scratch
And blue spurt of a lighted match,
And a voice less loud, through its joys and fears,
Than the two hearts beating each to each!

I think the theme of this poem is about a guy that is on a boat in the sean and he wants to be home really bad after a long time at sea. What hes saying about love is that he loves to be at home and on land after a long time at sea. The metaphor type that this auther is useing is one that the author never says that we really does want to be home but oyu can kind of tell from the way he talks about the land.

Tuesday, September 30, 2008


Poetry Critique

Biscuits Of Love
by Mindy Carpenter

Memories of my youth.
Flood over my soul.
When I think of Grandma.
They make me feel whole.
Gathering at her house.
With all the family there.
We made lots of memories.
For all of us to share.
Lessons that she taught me.
Guide me thru the day.
If I listened closely.
I cannot go astray.
Love and commitment.
She drilled into me.
Making the person that I am.
Just who I want to be.
Grandma has many names.
Each one has their chosen.
But the names I want her calledStarts with love,
For she is warm and not frozen.

http://famouspoetsandpoems.com/

I picked this poem because i read the the title and the first couple of lines and found it to be very interesting. it also talks about the love for her grandma, and i have alot of love for my grandma. I think that the title is good because it doesnt tell about the whole poem it just shows that there is love in the story. i also think that it talks about the biscuits beucase she might remember her grandmas house that way. Maybe her grandma made bicuits alot. Flood over my soul is a metaphor. for she is warm and not frozen is something that you have to figure out and see what she is saying. when she says this i think that she is talking about how her grandma is ery loveing and that all she is. The feeling that the poem give me is the feeling of love. The tone of this piece is memoy. i think this becuase the whole poem is about how she loves her grandma and loves to think about the great memorys that she had with her.

Tuesday, September 23, 2008

Choice


Today i am going to tell you about my trip to Arizona. i have been to Arizona twice in my life but i am going to tell you about my most recent time visiting there. During this past summer i went to Arizona for a family reunion. I had the time of my life when i was there. We traveled all around AZ we went from the south to the way top. We visited lake Powell witch is a very cool lake because all around the lake there is big cliffs and rocks. Its a lot different then Minnesota because around all the lakes in Minnesota there are big trees. At the end of the trip we ended up at my uncles house. He lives on a ranch and it is very cool. The best part about being in Arizona was being with all my cousins that i don't get to see very often.

Chioce

titles

Inspiration
Myself
How i've come to be

Thursday, September 18, 2008

tonight

Tonight should be a good night even though it is only a thursday. Around 8 oclock my best friend sam swenson is coming home from college. He is leaveing today around 5 from duluth. He is takeing the bus home from there and he has asked me to pick him up from the bus station. i havent been able to hangout with him sense he has left so i am really looking forward to when he gets back.

Perosnal Narrative

Conclusion

Ever sense i have met my coach's they have been big parts of my life. they have taught me what to do in parts of my life. their inspiration has made me the best person i could ever be.


I think i have to add parts from the story that show the inspiration they have given me

what do you think i should add to my conclusion that will make it more engaging.

Wednesday, September 10, 2008

Discover

Animals, bike jumps, bredasen, college, dizz, eazy e, fish tank, fishing, field trips, grizzly bears, hockey, halo, king, Minnesota, piranhas, playground, red rover, school, smokeless tobacco, snowboarding, stealing chromes, trumpet, tennis, tag, war, winter, and zoo.


Well i guess im going to start out the blogging carrer by writing about today. Today have been a rough day for me, but it has been going pretty well. I woke up this morning not feeling very good, my left ear hurts and my throat was feeling a little sour. I ate breakfast and went to school. Once i got to school i remembered that there was a deca vocab quiz 2nd hour. I tried to study for it in my first hour class, which was spanish. today was the first time all year we learned something in spanish, but i was to tired to remember what we were learning. the quiz went pretty good 2nd hour. at lunch i got nachos and sat with my friends. Now, i am in creative writing makeing a blog and starting off the blogging carrer.