Conclusion
Ever sense i have met my coach's they have been big parts of my life. they have taught me what to do in parts of my life. their inspiration has made me the best person i could ever be.
I think i have to add parts from the story that show the inspiration they have given me
what do you think i should add to my conclusion that will make it more engaging.
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I think like you said, that you should just add more descriptive words of how you felt about their advice and your advance to being "the best person you can be" and maybe about the decisions you have made along the way that they have had a big infulence on.
gorman.. I think you should expand and write more about how they helped you. Not only that they did but maybe expand and tell more reasons and go deeper to give emotion.
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